Comic 944 - Get him Veja!

3rd Jul 2017, 7:01 AM in Spirit of Adventure
Get him Veja!
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Lackinganame 3rd Jul 2017, 7:01 AM edit delete
Lackinganame
Hey it's the 4th this week! So go to the Holiday tab and check out this year's 4th of July picture!

In other news I'll also be rambling on the next page.

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Maryalee 3rd Jul 2017, 6:02 PM edit delete reply
Maryalee
Oh, Tina, Tina, you are much too close to those fireworks. *like I expected you to be careful*

I missed Valentines' Day, of course Veja would eat the chocolates instead of giving them away.

Panel 4 enraged Arua is beautiful. Arua is just beautiful, right? But that expression and those down-turned ears tell me she's not going to leave much, if anything, standing in that hell lab.

And her muzzle looks better than the beardog blasphemy we're still stuck with in-game.
Ty 20th Jul 2017, 5:19 PM edit delete reply
Woah, woah, coroner/coffin-sizer guy. You left without explaining how the 13th toll of the clock tower works and figures into your plans!
Lackinganame 21st Jul 2017, 8:57 AM edit delete reply
Lackinganame
Ya, I had a different set up with this story. The thirteenth toll was caused by mechanics in the tower opening and closing the secret door. The door lead to the bell tower's creator secret workshop where he developed all his inventions.

The story also had a plot point where Arua and Cer'veja would find a half finished message that would spell Bel and they would think that the message was about Belmont. Only to go to him and find he had been taken by the Street Stalkers. The problem was I never came up with who left the message and I put to much attention on the Bell tower. So in many respects this story fell apart on function levels.
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