Gratz
Comic 330 - Dream Elixir
Author Notes:
over the last week I got a itch that I could be doing better with my Gratz art work. now that's a statement of the obvious but all the same I wanted to do better. a keen eye view may notice a few things different on some of these panels as evidence of my tinkering.
So my question is what do you think I should incorporate more into my art?
warning: all suggestions will be read but may not be implemented right away or even at all feed back will be welcome but changes are subjected to the skill and judgment of the writer/artist of this comic who really to much shouldn't be expected from. standing copy wrights apply and why are you still even reading this?
Next week is going be fun!
(next up date 8-19-13)
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Whatever tinkering you did makes the comic look "cleaner".
You might experiment with some shading.
The tinkering I've done is a bit more with highlights and unlike the last few weeks updates this last page did not have a 10% black opacity layer over the top of everything (except eyes). shading is one of those things I want to try more out with. thanks for the feed back!
As a suggestion maybe try adding highlights or JSSStryker said, mess around with shading.
its funny you should both mention highlights, that is one of the things I have been looking into and as of today I did a page for next week update where I was quite happy with the hair highlights and I'm all ready tickled with anticipation for next week's update because of that!
thanks for the feed back and good to hear for ya.